First draft delivered today. Yay me, etc.
Took about nine weeks, instead of the twelve allocated. Roughly broken down into three weeks of “I’ve got loads of time to do this”, three weeks of “shit I’d better be getting on with this”, two weeks of “I’m never going to finish this in time”, and this week, where I did finish it in time and actually managed to allow myself a period of quiet reflection to go away and come at it afresh for some last minute cut-backs and make-betters. I’m pretty happy with it, but then again I’ve read it about twenty times in the last three days so objectivity is long gone. And when is good enough good enough? I could keep noodling forever, but certainly at this first draft stage the chick needs to be tossed out of the nest sooner rather than later.
Fingers and eyes are both hurting so I’ll leave it there. Will feedback on feedback.
Step | Name | Duration | Delivery Date | +/- Schedule |
1. | First Draft Treatment | 1 month | 15/11/12 | |
Initial Step Outline | 2 weeks | 26/10/12 | ||
Initial Step Outline client comments | 4 days | 30/10/12 | ||
First Draft Treatment | 2 weeks | 16/11/12 | -1 Day | |
2. | First Draft Treatment client comments | 3 weeks | 06/12/12 | |
Client comments | 2.5 weeks | 03/12/12 | +3 Days | |
3. | Second Draft Treatment | 10 days | 16/12/12 | |
Writer response (not treatment) | 2.5 weeks | 20/12/12 | -4 Days | |
Client comments | 3 weeks | 06/01/13 | ||
Second Draft Treatment | 10 days | 17/01/13 | -1 Month | |
4. | Second Draft Treatment client comments | 4 weeks | 13/01/13 | |
Client comments | 21/01/13 | -1 Week | ||
5. | First Draft | 12 weeks | 07/04/13 | |
9 weeks | 22/03/13 | +2 Weeks | ||
6. | First Draft client comments | 8 weeks | 02/06/13 | |
7. | Revised First Draft | 4 weeks | 30/06/13 | |
8. | Revised First Draft client comments | 2 weeks | 14/07/13 | |
9. | Second Draft | 4 weeks | 11/08/13 | |
11. | Second Draft First Set | 6 weeks | 22/09/13 | |
12. | Second Draft Second Set | 6 weeks | 03/11/13 |
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